Wednesday, 14 August 2019

sir edmund hillary

sup bloggers, this is a sick sentence of sir edmund hillary and I fixed it. enjoy
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1 comment:

  1. Sarah19 August 2019 at 08:27

    Hi ALan
    Well done on fixing those sentences and making them more interesting by adding more detail, adjectives, verbs and adverbs. Something to work on next time is thinking about changing some of the sentence starters as lots of them start the same way.

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