Friday, 16 August 2019

story of sir edmund hillary (if i was him)

Sir Edmund: "It's super cold Tenzing!"
Tenzing: "Yea it is!"
Sir Edmund: "Where almost to the! We gotta hurry!"
Tenzing: "I can see the top!"
Sir Edmund Hillary: "Me too!"
Few seconds later......
Sir Edmund Hillary: "YES!!!! WE MADE IT TENZING! WE ARE THE FIRST PEOPLE TO CLIMB MOUNT EVEREST TO THE TOP!!!!!!!"
Tenzing: "YES!!!!! Edmund put down your flag so if somebody climbs up here, they would know somebody already have bee to the top!"
Hillary: "Good idea."
So Hillary and Tenzing put down a flag and stayed there for a while and then they went down. When they came down everybody was there and was happy. They celebrated and went back to there place. Edmund used his money for good things.
Edmund: "I'm gonna use my money to buy schools and hospitals for the people that need them."
Tenzing: t"hats nice Edmund."
After Sir Edmund climbed Mount Everest, he was knighted by Queen Elizabeth the Second. Then he was called Sir Edmund Hillary.
Sir Edmund became a everyday heroes for using his money from climbing Mount Everest to buy schools and hospitals.
THE END

1 comment:

  1. Hi Alan
    I like the dialogue that you have used between the two climbers. Perhaps next time you could show how the characters are feeling throughout their journey and after successfully climbing the mountain as I'm sure their emotions changed changed a lot.

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