Piece by piece, the street was disappearing. Land was taken and all land was at its brink. Everything faded into black mist and drifted off. Shaking I glared at the fade realizing that I was next. I wondered where I would go. The door that I came from was too far now. My whole life passed through my thoughts. As soon as snapped out of it I realized that I’d rather fade trying than just disappear. I gaped it at the door and swung It open.
I looked at the place and said “that's one I couldn't save” and left. When I was home the place was glitching like life was a game and there was no wifi. I noticed that whenever I pick something up it would make a chi ching sound. Wherever I look there are 3 hearts like how much lives you have left. Running, I went outside. It seemed empty. As I walked I felt the hairs at the back of my neck stood up, I knew I wasn't alone.
to be continued
Kia ora Alan. Ooooh this story really gripped me and made me feel chills! I love the idea of you becoming part of the game. You described the scene well and built up a great sense of mood. I really like the line 'the place was glitching like life was a game and there was no wifi.' The ending was particularly suspenseful and left me wanting more!
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