One of the aliens pulled a lever and the glass dome shattered into small bits. I was shocked the tape had worn out a bit so I shaked it off and the cuffs came of when the glass shattered. I was once again outside the chamber and released into this world. Oh no I thought I lost a heart from the top key of my eye. I think this meant that I died once and have two left.
Wednesday, 29 April 2020
writing part 5?
I was in the dome, “dam” It was too easy to get out this was probably a way to get me in here. The licorish was probably drugged or something. Now I couldn’t move and a piece of tape was over my mouth preventing me from talking. I was done for, but then I saw them, my friends, they came for me. They were well hidden behind a clump of garbage. Something is up with the random alien things and metal and it's really bugging me.
One of the aliens pulled a lever and the glass dome shattered into small bits. I was shocked the tape had worn out a bit so I shaked it off and the cuffs came of when the glass shattered. I was once again outside the chamber and released into this world. Oh no I thought I lost a heart from the top key of my eye. I think this meant that I died once and have two left.
One of the aliens pulled a lever and the glass dome shattered into small bits. I was shocked the tape had worn out a bit so I shaked it off and the cuffs came of when the glass shattered. I was once again outside the chamber and released into this world. Oh no I thought I lost a heart from the top key of my eye. I think this meant that I died once and have two left.
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Hi Alan, you are keeping me on the edge of my seat with the latest instalment of your writing. Have you come up with a title yet? I've heard some authors have no idea what the title is until they've finished the whole story?
ReplyDeleteWow that was cool too bad I can't make it even more scary but that was cool how you lost a life
ReplyDeleteKia ora Alan. Another fantastic addition to your story. Only 2 lives left. Eek. You have again used some great vocab to build the scene and mood of the story. What is going to happen next??
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