Three little pigs remix
Once upon a time there lived three pigs and they lived with their mother in a huge mansion. One day the mother kicked them out and told them that if they ever came back she would call the homeless wolf to come and eat them. The little pigs accept defeat and clamber into their new houses in the city. The city was huge but they were broke and cant afford a flashy house to live in so they paid a person and rented a flat to stay in. The place was nice and roomy. One of the pigs did not like the room and left. He left to a place called”moms house” and he got eaten by the homeless wolf. The wolf enjoyed his meal and seaked more of this food. He left his cardboard box to go find more food. The pigs planned their great route to victory. But the wolf was still out looking and found the pigs. At this point the wolf was starving but the pigs said they were cannibals and said that vegans taste better. The pigs lead the wolf to the “mums house” and watched the wolf demolish their moms flesh. They left the wolf in the house to starve and they lived in the flat for life.
THE END
Kia Ora Alan!
ReplyDeleteAbdi here from Room 25.
I really like the way you've made a remix about the three little pigs and how you've described the story and how you've used many types of punctuation in it.
Thanks for sharing!
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Kia ora Alan, Cole here From room 25.
ReplyDeleteI Really liked your Blog post about the three little pigs story. I also like how you changed it a bit so it was more original. I remember when i did a comic strip of this on my Blog. I think that maybe next time you make a post you could include a DLO. What do you think the hardest bit of writing this post was? come check out my Blog Here
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Hi Cole, Alan here.
DeleteThanks for commenting on my blog post. Next time I will try to add a DLO. The hardest part of this post was just typing, I had it all planned in my head but I am bad at typing.
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Alan
Malo e lelei Alan, my name is Lila and I’m from Room 7 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about your three little pigs remix! I have never tried doing a remix before but you inspired me to try! Have you ever tried doing a remix about something else? How long did this take you to make it? Was it fun to make?
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