Monday, 27 April 2020

writing part 3

 The first one had a backwards cap and a tattoo under his eye.
He was also skinny like me. It seemed scary. He had a bandanna
around his mouth, this huge hoodie and one humongous sword in
a sleeve going down his back. Finally was just a normal looking kid
with a backpack and an orange shirt. As I stood up they introduced
themselves as the normal kid's name was Tai and the scary one called
himself x-ray and the last one's name was stick. “I’m Alan'' I said.
It was an awkward silence and all of a sudden x-ray screeched
“get down” and tackled me to the floor. X-ray looked up, I did too. 

We all saw an army of things? Walking around the streets. 
They seemed to be looking for something…
I think that something was us?!??!?!

3 comments:

  1. I am going to make this story and triple the scarceness

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    1. OK see you at school.
      bai boi

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  2. Kia ora Alan. You have built up the description of the characters well by adding lots of detail for the reader to build a mental picture of what they look like. Looking forward to the next part!

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